Wednesday, September 10, 2008
#1
Have you ever really looked at the sun when its rising or setting, Well I have. It's an amazing thing to witness here on earth. Maybe you have but for the weird aliens who haven't yet here's a little taste. Its best to observe the sun when it is lowest to the horizon. Get yourself comfortable and just let the raise of the sun luminate you. It will literally crate a new spectrum of color for any being/ person. don't just look at the sun look at the clouds the way it reflexs its colors, Look at the landscape it will constintly be changing with the sun's position, and most important pay attention to the absolute beuity of it all. So the next time your about to orbit an land on the planet enjoy the beams of light for they are unique and wonderful unlike any planet in the Universe.
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I really liked your description of the sunset. It's really cool and calming. I really love the sunset. Your description reminds me off past sunsets i've seen. One thing that i would change is you didn't say the two different audiences that you were telling the description to. It seemed like you didn't give two different description. Besides that it was really good.
I like the picture you paint of a sunset. It's easy to sort of see it in my head as you describe it, which makes the whole thing easy to understand. I also thought the closing sentence fit in nicely and was a good way to end the passage. As for improvements, I agree with butterfly, it seems like there is only one audience being written to. There are also a few minor spelling errors, but besides that it's very well done.
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